Self Assesment of First Drafts.

I have looked at my draft front cover against the mark scheme and have decided on what i need to improve on.

At the moment i would say that my front cover is basic and needs lots of improvements to be made to it.

Firstly i need to change the picture on my cover, i used this picture from the first set of test shots that i had took, from looking at my cover now i have realised that this photo doesn't work effectively. I find that the image being in black and white makes the whole cover seem boring as the rest of my colour scheme doesn't include very bright colours so i have decided i need the image in colour to make my cover stand out more. I can also see that the image wasn't cut out particularly well by me and that i need to improve my Photoshop skills. I also need to change the layout of my magazine and choose a font that stands out more.After looking at my colour scheme i find that the colours used are all dull and for this reason may not make my cover have a good enough impact so I'm going to re-evaluate the colour scheme and may change it to make my cover have more of and impact on the reader.

Overall i think my cover needs a lot of work , and i feel it looks rushed and very basic, i will improve this when i do my final cover.

After looking at my draft contents page i can see that the layout on the page doesnt work and needs to be changed. I am going to look at more contents pages and take some inspiration for a more effective layout. i also need to choose another font for all of the text on the page because on my draft the font doesnt really fit in with the theme of my magazine and it looks quite random. i also need to add more text to my contents page and change the no.'s so that they go up to a higher number rather than 25.

Some of the things that i think work quite well on my contents page are the 2 banners that run across the top and bottom of the page as i think this looks effective. I also like the headings as they match the masthead on my front cover , i also like them because they look like they have been drawn and i said in an earlier post that i would like to use a handwritten style font.

Out of all the pages this was my favourite. I am planning to improve it by changing my columns so that they are more aligned and look more professional. i may also need to change the layout slightly because of the page fold and where it goes through the page, on my draft it goes straight through a photo and my middle column of my article so this will need changing.

Although i like the banners on the top and bottom of the pages i need to change the page no.'s as they look blurry and messy.

I like the text used for 'Hope Tyler' as i think it contrasts well with the headings i have used on other pages.

Overall i think i have a lot of changes that need to be made on my drafts especially with the layout of each page as this seems to be a recurring issue with each page. To get inspiration for a better layout i am going to look at other magazines that are out on the market and look for layouts that i like that i think i could use elements of in my magazine.